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Chapter 3
Believe
Erin sat stunned after she listened to the message over again. Bernie and Bryan were Hazel’s husband and 5-year-old son who had been killed in an auto accident 20 years before. What in the world could she be talking about? Hazel was a regular in the shop, and Erin had known her all her life. Ever since she lost her family, Hazel had turned inward. Her house was falling down around her and she wouldn’t let anyone come and help. She still managed to come into the store nearly every mid-morning for her favorite Sly and the Family Bagel with a smear of California Creamin’.
What could Hazel have meant by her message? What had she found out? As far as Erin knew, there had never been any question about the car accident being just that. It had been a foggy night as is common in the hills above Clairmont. Bernie and Bryan had been coming home from T-ball practice. Bernie was a careful driver, but the fog can be disorienting. Erin had just been a small child at the time, but she remembered her parents talking about it. The guardrail above the canyon road hadn’t been able to keep them from going over the side. It had been a great tragedy.
Erin punched Hazel’s number into her cell phone. Drumming her fingers on her oak desk, Erin waited while the phone on the other end rang. And rang. And rang.
Maybe she’s on her way here, Erin thought. It was a little early, but Hazel didn’t always keep to her schedule. Knowing Hazel didn’t have voicemail, Erin hung up after a dozen rings and decided to try again later. It was hard to believe that Hazel could have uncovered something after 20 years, but Erin wasn’t going to dismiss the fear she had heard in Hazel’s voice.
When Hazel hadn’t shown up by 10:00, Erin tried calling again, with the same results. She was definitely getting worried. She picked up her phone again and dialed her Uncle Harry.
“Y’ello,” Harry answered on the second ring.
“Hey, Harry. It’s Erin. Gotta question for you.”
“Shoot me straight, little girl, “ Harry said in his usual breezy way.
“Take me back 20 years to the night of the Hodges’ accident. Was there ever any question about what happened there?” Erin questioned.
“Not that I can think of,” Harry answered. “Why you askin’? That was a long time ago.”
“Hazel left me a very cryptic message on voicemail,” Erin explained. “Said she was scared. She had uncovered something that showed the accident was not really an accident.”
“Erin, you know Hazel’s a few cards short of a full deck,” Harry came back. “I mean, I love her and all, but she’s a little loopy.”
“I know, Harry,” Erin conceded. “But this time sounded different. She’s never left a message like that before. I’ve tried to call her a couple of times, but she hasn’t answered.”
“Doesn’t she usually come in the shop about this time?” Harry asked. “I bet she’ll be there any minute and not even remember she left such a message. I wouldn’t worry about it too much.”
“OK, Uncle Harry. You’re probably right. I just worry about her sometimes,” Erin said. “You gonna come by some time today?”
“Nah,” Harry answered. “I’ve got some things I wanna get done around the house. And I think I’m gonna meet Gordy for lunch on campus.”
Gordon Harrison was Harry’s brother and Erin’s father, an Economics professor at U.C. Berkeley. Gordon had been a widower ever since Erin’s mom had passed away from pancreatic cancer seven years earlier. She was glad the brothers were close, even though they were so different.
“OK,” Erin replied. “Give him bunches of kisses for me.”
Harry barked out a hearty laugh, “Oh yeah, I’ll be sure to do just that, little girl. Don’t you worry.”
They hung up and Erin sat for another few minutes, wondering about just what might have happened that night 20 years ago.