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Chapter 1—Story

Here’s your teaser for my 31 Days of Writing challenge!

Chapter 1

Story

Everyone has a story. Erin Harrison just wished hers was more like an epic “Wuthering Heights” or “Gone With the Wind” than the Reader’s Digest Condensed Version of the terrible “List of the Lost.”

In her little corner of the village of Clairmont on the outskirts of Oakland, California, Erin did her best to keep her plotline going. Whether it be at Be My Bagel, the 60s-themed bagel shop she ran for her hippy Uncle Harry, or with her adorably scatter-brained English Lit professor-wannabe boyfriend, Cory, Erin made the most of her days.

And some days were definitely more interesting than others.

Take Tuesday, October 2nd, for instance.

 

The early Autumn day started out like many others. Her double-belled pink alarm clock woke her with a heart-shaking clatter and she slammed her hand onto the lever to turn off the blasted clarion. Why could she never remember to order a new alarm clock that might wake her slowly with the sweet sound of twittering birds instead? Well, at least it was effective.

With that surge of adrenalin crashing through her veins, Erin threw off the bright orange comforter that didn’t help calm her brain any with its effervescent sunniness. Stumbling in the pre-dawn darkness to her small bathroom at the end of the hall in her tiny one-bedroom apartment, Erin groaned as she caught sight of her sleep-deprived face.

Darn that Sue Grafton for writing such captivating stories. I gotta get better at putting down her books before midnight.

But mysteries were her downfall.

Erin felt a silky softness caress her bare legs and looked down to find her orange tabby, Einstein, wrapping around her legs.

“Give me a minute, baby. I can’t even see what I’m doing yet.”

Einstein jumped onto the top of the toilet tank, sitting and staring as if to say, politely of course, because he was always polite, “I’ll wait for you, my dear, because I know you’ll never forget about me.”

Several minutes and lots of cold-water splashes later, a few swishes of the brush through her long blond hair, Erin grabbed her black-framed, round glasses from the counter and headed to the bright yellow kitchen to get them both some breakfast.

The sun was just beginning to peak through the high clouds as Erin pulled out the white wrought iron chair that sat at her small kitchen table. Since the window faced west with a stunning view of the San Francisco Bay, she only knew that by the tinges of pink stretching across the sky. These early mornings weren’t her favorite, so she was thankful that she only had to open the shop 2 days a week. Every other day, Uncle Harry did the deed, although he was hours after the bakers in charge of creating the deliciousness arrived to start their bagel-baking process.

With her automatic coffee maker dripping away, Erin poured brown pellets of kitty food into Einstein’s bowl next to the table, and refilled his water bowl. He gave a soft mew of appreciation and set out to satiate his hunger. His mouse hunting in the night must not have yielded him anything. Thankfully. In an over-the-garage apartment in a well-established neighborhood in the hills high above Clairmont, one could never be too sure what creatures would make their way through her doors.

But she was very grateful for the accommodation. After graduating from Berkeley with her business degree, Erin had wanted to stand on her own, not depending on her father for housing. Besides, Gordon Harrison needed his space for the lovely Ellen to visit when she was in town. An economist for the city of San Diego, Ellen had entered Gordon’s life one sunny spring day during an economics conference. As a tenured economics professor at U.C. Berkeley, Gordon was a keynote speaker. Ellen tried to visit at least once a month. Erin adored her and hoped that marriage might be in their future. Her dad had been a widower for far too long.

The scent of Peet’s cinnamon coffee brought her back to attention, so Erin got her favorite “It’s no mystery, I love coffee” mug and filled it three quarters full, adding half and half from the throw-back refrigerator to fill it out. Popping a piece of sourdough bread into her teal toaster, Erin sipped her coffee and mentally check-listed everything she had to do that day.

Yesterday, Harry would have taken care of the order that would be delivered today, so when that came in, she would need to inventory it to make sure it was correct. Bills would be paid, salaries for her five employees would be calculated, and she would need to post an update to the shop’s Instagram and Facebook accounts. Which bagel flavor should she highlight today? Creedence Clearwater Rebagel or Pink Bagel? Seeing that it was early Autumn, maybe the cinnamony goodness of the CCR would be appropriate. She’d see to that first thing.

 

As she made her way down the hill to Clairmont Village in the early morning mist, Erin tuned the radio in her little VW Beetle to NPR. Sometimes that was the quickest way to catch up on the happenings around the world. A tsunami in Indonesia. Very sad. Politics, turmoil, flu season starting. Is there ever any good news? She didn’t have a very long drive. The winding roads that got her off the hill only took about 15 minutes. Not very much time to cover everything.

As she pulled into the only parking garage in the village, a short 2 block walk to the shop, the last bit of news she caught was about a crime ring in Berkeley. A crime ring? In Berkeley? She thought. Drugs maybe. Or protestors? But a crime ring? Huh.

Without giving it too much of her attention, Erin closed the door of her Bug, locked it with the key, because, you know, crime rings, and headed toward Be My Bagel.

 

 

31-Days of Writing—a story!

This month is a special challenge as my Five Minute Friday posts will become a whole month of writing for October! I have decided to try to write a fictional story using the daily prompts provided by the Five Minute Friday host, Kate Motaung.

So each day I will write, but I won’t be posting every day. Since the story is in process, I will only post a teaser maybe once a week, possibly twice as the month go on.

Important to note here is that I will be using the daily prompts as chapter heads, but in the limited amount of time I have, I do not anticipate that I will be completely filling out a chapter as I go. Maybe I’ll surprise myself, but the goal of the challenge is to write for at least 5 minutes every day. Anyone who has written a fictional story knows that 5 minutes a day isn’t very much! I have been able to do more at this point, but some days are busier than others.

So this will serve as my Table of Contents post for each prompt. I will hyper link them as I want to share teasers of the story. I hope you come back throughout the month to check it out. I’ve titled the story “The Clue in the Collectibles.” We’ll see how it goes!

Story

Afraid

Believe

Why

Share

Belong

Hope

Comfort

Inspire

How

Door

Praise

Talk

Ask

When

Pray

Pause

Search

Who

Audience

Start

Help

Common

Brief

Capture

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Whole

Song

Together

Voice

Close

If you are intrigued and want to check in, go to www.fiveminutefriday.com (the 31-day challenge is linked here) and find my link (#79) for this blog “Compelled” and click on it. It should bring you to this table of contents and you’ll be able to click the hyperlinks. You can tell that it’s got a hyperlink if it’s blue. Hope you come back often!

 

The Potential Already Lies Within

IMG_9910In his book StrengthsFinder 2.0, author Tom Rath takes on an American icon. He takes the story of Rudy Ruettiger, dramatized in the 1993 movie Rudy, and turns it upside down. He says, “While Rudy’s perseverance is admirable, in the end, he played a few seconds of college football and made a single tackle . . . after thousands of hours of practicing.”

His point is that we idolize those who overcome great odds—and a lack of natural talent—to show that “overcoming deficits is an essential part of the fabric of our culture.”

Maybe it’s obvious by the title of his book, but what Rath is getting at is that instead of embracing the idea that “you can be anything you want to be as long as you try hard enough,” why don’t we look for where people are strong and encourage them in that?

Where do they really show potential?

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My 16-year-old daughter could carry a tune before she could talk. She would sing in her sweet baby voice with words we couldn’t understand, but we always knew what she was singing because we recognized the tune. The barrier she’s working to overcome isn’t one of natural talent, that she has in abundance. Her hurdle is shyness and a lack of desire to ever be in the public eye.

Consider the parable of the talents. The master gave to each servant what He willed, and they then had to do something with it.

Rather than seeing something you want and overcoming every obstacle to gain it, why don’t you look at what you’ve been given and invest it in the absolute best way you can?

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Perfect and Complete

IMG_3766“And let steadfastness have its full effect, that you may be perfect and complete, lacking in nothing” (James 1:4).

Perfect and complete. Sounds good, doesn’t it? I would love to get to that point where I feel like I have nothing else to learn, nothing else to gain.

But you know what comes right before verse 4? Verse 3: “for you know that the testing of your faith produces steadfastness.”

Oh boy. The testing of my faith. Do I really have to go through that in order to gain steadfastness, which is what leads to my being perfect and complete?

And you know what comes before verse 3? That’s right, verse 2? Want to see it? Are you sure you’re ready?

OK, here goes: “Count it all joy, my brothers, when you meet trials of various kinds.”

IMG_3257Trials of various kind. Producing steadfastness. Leading to being perfect and complete.

Got it.

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So I guess that “lacking in nothing” part that comes at the end of verse 4 would mean that I have everything I need to face these trials of various kinds. That’s comforting. I know that no matter what I encounter in my life, God is always there with me. That old adage that is completely false and non-biblical can be thrown out. God certainly will give me more than I can handle so that I will depend on Him.

P1000628And I will gain steadfastness.

And I will be perfect and complete. In Jesus. When He takes me home.

Amen.

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Take Me Out With The Crowd

IMG_8034I’m headed out of town with David today. We’re going to St. Petersburg, Fla., for the weekend to watch my beloved Oakland Athletics play the Tampa Bay Rays. Last year we went to a doubleheader. The year before that we took the kids to a single game. It’s become a tradition for us to attend at least one game of the series when the A’s are in Florida.

I love being out with the crowd. The noise, the pristine field mowed perfectly. (OK, so the Trop is a dome and therefore an artificial surface, but a girl can dream, can’t she?) I’ve never caught a foul ball. I hope one comes near us this time.

There’s nothing like the roar of the crowd when a batter hits a home run. Do you know how far those little white balls have to travel? A football field is 100 yards, that’s 300 feet.IMG_8029 Most home runs have to clear a fence that is nearly 400 feet away from home plate.

That’s pretty far.

There’s strategy and mystery (ever try to figure out the signs the managers and coaches are flashing?) and joy and sorrow (ever had your slugger strike out when the bases are loaded?).

The lyrics to the iconic 7th-inning-stretch song fit me well.

 

Katie Casey was baseball mad,
Had the fever and had it bad.
Just to root for the home town crew,
Ev’ry sou
Katie blew.
On a Saturday her young beau
Called to see if she’d like to go
To see a show, but Miss Kate said “No,
I’ll tell you what you can do:”

Chorus

Take me out to the ball game,
Take me out with the crowd;
Buy me some peanuts and Cracker Jack,
I don’t care if I never get back.
Let me root, root, root for the home team,
If they don’t win, it’s a shame.
For it’s one, two, three strikes, you’re out,
At the old ball game.

Katie Casey saw all the games,
Knew the players by their first names.
Told the umpire he was wrong,
All along,
Good and strong.
When the score was just two to two,
Katie Casey knew what to do,
Just to cheer up the boys she knew,
She made the gang sing this song:

(Jack Norworth and Albert Von Tilzer, 1908)

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